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题目Environmental problems are so big today that they cannot be solved by individual country or people and must be solved for international joint effort. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
环境问题如此复杂以至于一个国家不可能解决,必须通过国际合作,你是否同意这个说法
Whether individual country plays an important role in the environmental problems has triggered an extensive discussion among social members . Environmental problems, a global issue attracts increasingly more attentions from the environmentalists from all over the world who are bound to make a great effort to settle the issue.
社会成员之间进行广泛的讨论是否一个国家能够解决环境问题。环境问题,一个全球性的问题,越来越受到人们的关注,来自世界各地的环保主义者一直在努力去解决这个问题。
To begin with, it is obvious that the environment is damaged not only by one country but many during the course of industrialization. Many countries developed at a high speed so that they ignore the the amount of carbon dioxide and methane increased causing the global warming and other atmosphere problems. What human beings have to do is that they should enhance the awareness of protecting the environment, which should be encouraged not by only a nation but all the countries around. Protecting the environment is bound to cost a large sum of money one country is not be able to afford. Moreover, it is meaningless that some countries are joint efforts to save the nature while other countries are damaging it. Joint efforts made by many countries play an extremely important role in the problem-solving in the environment.
首先,显而易见的是环境被破坏不仅仅是由一个国家工业化过程中造成的。许多国家的发展的如此速度以至于他们迅速增加了二氧化碳和甲烷的量的增加,导致全球变暖等环境问题。人类所要做的就是要加强环境保护意识,应鼓励世界上所有的国家不仅仅是一个国家去 保护环境。保护环境花费巨大,这不是一个国家能够负担得起的。此外,如果一些国家在破坏环境而一些国家在保护,那么再多的努力也是徒劳的。各个国家的共同努力非常重要
Second, protecting the environment is not easy for the environmental researchers. For instance, they are still looking the main causes ofthe global warming. If the global warming is caused by excessive gases emissions, they will take effective measures to decrease the amount of gas discharge; if not , maybe it is interglacial period predicted by the geologists. The problem is so complex that researchers from a nation cannot make it. They need to take part in some international seminars to discuss and do further research. The importance of the cooperation should not be ignored by them. Therefore, in my opinion, it is impossible to solve the problems by a country.
第二,对于研究者来说,保护环境是不容易的。例如,他们研究全球变暖的主要原因。如果全球变暖是由过多的气体的排放造成的,他们将采取有效措施来减少气体排放量;如果没有,也许这是地质学家预测暖季。问题是如此复杂 到一个国家搞不定这个问题。他们需要参加一些国际研讨会,讨论和进一步的研究。他们不能忽略合作的重要性因此,在我看来,这是不可能由一个国家解决问题。
Last but not least, the problems is not only concerning the air contamination, but water pollution, deforestation, desertification and so on. Leaders of the government from most countries should reach an agreement to come up with a series of policies to protect the environment to relieve the pressure of the environment. For my perspective, countries should be encouraged to participate in the international environmental summit to discuss the environment rather than one country to solve the problems.
最重要的是,环境问题不仅仅是是对空气的污染,但而且还有水污染,森林砍伐,土地沙漠化等。大多数国家的政府领导人应该达成一项协议,提出一系列有效的政策来保护环境,减轻环境压力。我认为,应该鼓励各国参与国际环境峰会讨论环境而不是一个国家来解决问题。