我常常改海洋、气象、气候研究的文章。今天斗胆分析一篇离我的专业较远的摘要。
Super sensitivity and super resolution with quantum teleportation
https://www.nature.com/articles/s41534-019-0132-4
[1] We propose a method for quantum enhanced phase estimation based on continuous variable (CV) quantum teleportation.
评论:这里没有必要定义缩写CV,因为后面一共才用了一次。(一般是用三次缩写,才值得定义。)
用quantum-enhanced?
[2] The phase shift probed by a coherent state can be enhanced by repeatedly teleporting the state back to interact with the phase shift again using a supply of two-mode squeezed vacuum states.
评论:我太外行,不知道two-mode是否应该是two mode,因为后面有states。
[3] In this way a sequential protocol exhibiting both super-resolution and super-sensitivity can be obtained due to the coherent addition of the phase shift.
评论:In this way后面加个逗号吧?我不太喜欢这里的due to。
[4] The protocol enables Heisenberg-limited sensitivity and super-resolution given sufficiently strong squeezing.
评论:感觉Heisenberg-limited sensitivity应该是Heisenberg-limited-sensitivity。
[5] The proposed method could be implemented with current or near-term technology of CV teleportation.
评论:could有点太“娘娘腔”(弱)?