The goal is to learn how to write better.
分析的目的是为了提高科技英语写作水平(不是针对作者)。
Green highlight is used to show good writing.
好好学习：用绿色标出。
Yellow means "questionable."
敢于提问：用黄色标出。
A Trip Upstream to Mitigate Marine Plastic Pollution – A Perspective Focused on the MSFD and WFD
评论：谁知道MSFD和WFD是什么？
https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fmars.2019.00689/full?utm_source=F-AAE&utm_medium=EMLF&utm_campaign=MRK_1171390_45_Marine_20191203_arts_A
Developing and implementing effective legislation to combat plastic litterin the marine environment has proven a significant challenge.
评论：科技英语应该避免用prove.
This is in large part due to an incomplete understanding of the sources and transport pathways of plastic litter and is manifested in Europe’s current disjointed legislation that governs the aquatic environment.
In this article, the authors present the perspective that marine plastic pollution in European waters cannot be mitigated without increased regional integration between the dominant legislative structures and must provide specific considerations for the role rivers and land-based activities play in the accumulation of plastic litter in the marine environment.
评论：the authors + verb 是比较“老式的”的用法。
这个句子太长了。太长就容易“出错”。考一下，错在哪里？
最后，摘要没有定义MSFD和WFD。我看了一下，在introduction里有：the Marine Strategy Framework Directive (MSFD) (Directive 2008/56/EC) and Water Framework Directive (WFD) (Directive 2000/60/EC)
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http://blog.sciencenet.cn/blog-306792-1146690.html
